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Elizabeth Bishop (Photo: Bettman/CORBIS) |
Megan Marshall, in her fascinating “Elizabeth and Alice”
(“Page-Turner,” newyorker.com, October 27, 2016) identifies “you” in Elizabeth
Bishop’s “One Art” (The New Yorker,
April 26, 1976) as Bishop’s partner, Alice Methfessel, who left Bishop, in
1975, after a five-year relationship. Marshall also reports that “One Art” went
through seventeen drafts. She writes,
As late as draft eleven, the loss of Methfessel still
registered in the poem’s concluding stanza as the one misfortune Bishop could
not withstand: “My losses haven’t been too hard to master / with this exception
(Say it!) this disaster.”
Marshall concludes, “But, though she later described “One
Art” as ‘pure emotion,’ Bishop guarded her feelings in the final version’s last
stanza, pretending bravery.”
I confess that “pretending bravery” irks me. It makes it
sound as if “One Art” ’s stoicism is a put-on. I think when Bishop says, “The
art of losing isn’t hard to master,” she means it. Helen Vendler, in her
brilliant “Caught and Freed: Elizabeth Bishop and Geography III” (included in her 2010 Last Looks, Last Books), writes,
By bringing “One Art” down to the very moment of present
writing, by lifting her pen after she writes “like” and then reinscribing
“like” after her tenacious interpolation of self-command “(Write it!),” Bishop turns once again to the one art she has claimed
to master: stoicism in the face of what seems certain ruin. Her art, wrung from
loss, paradoxically becomes her life principle.
What Bishop wrote in her eleventh draft is interesting. But what she wrote in her final draft is determinative. That draft shows
her, as Vendler says, “turning once again to the one art she has claimed to
master: stoicism in the face of what seems certain ruin.”
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