Jonathan Galassi, in his
absorbing “Updike’s Violin” (The New York
Review of Books, December 17, 2015), criticizes John Updike’s poetry for
failing to be transformative. Galassi says, “He sees, he denotes, but he does
not transform. His observations nearly always remain the beginning and the end
of his writing in verse.” I agree that Updike’s poems, particularly the
brilliant ten-poem sequence, “Endpoint,” that appeared in the March 16, 2009 New Yorker, aren’t transformative. That’s
exactly why I treasure them. They are poems of untransformed reality. For
example, consider "Fred Muth, Peggy Lutz," the seventh poem in the “Endpoint”
sequence:
December 13, 2008
They’ve been in my fiction;
both now dead,
Peggy just recently, long
stricken (like
my Grandma) with Parkinson’s
disease.
But what a peppy knockout
Peggy was!—
cheerleader, hockey star, May
Queen, RN.
Pigtailed in kindergarten,
she caught my mother’s
eye, but she was too much
girl for me.
Fred—so bright, so quietly
wry—his
mother’s eye fell on me, a
“nicer” boy
than her son’s pet pals.
Fred’s slight wild streak
was tamed by diabetes. At the
end,
it took his toes and feet.
Last time we met,
his walk rolled wildly,
fetching my coat. With health
he might have soared. As was,
he taught me smarts.
Dear friends of childhood,
classmates, thank you,
scant hundred of you, for
providing a
sufficiency of human types:
beauty,
bully, hanger-on, natural,
twin, and fatso—all a writer
needs,
all there in Shillington, its
trolley cars
and little factories,
cornfields and trees,
leaf fires, snowflakes,
pumpkins, valentines.
To think of you brings tears
less caustic
than those the thought of
death brings. Perhaps
we meet our heaven at the
start and not
the end of life. Even then
were tears
and fear and struggle, but
the town itself
draped in plain glory the
passing days.
The town forgave me for
existing; it
included me in Christmas
carols, songfests
(though I sang poorly) at the
Shillington,
the local movie house. My father
stood,
in back, too restless to sit,
but everybody
knew his name, and mine. In
turn I knew
my Granddad in the overalled
town crew.
I’ve written these before,
these modest facts,
but their meaning has no
bottom in my mind.
The fragments in their jiggled
scope collide
to form more sacred windows.
I had to move
to beautiful New England—its
triple
deckers, whited churches,
unplowed streets—
to learn how drear and deadly
life can be.
That “The town forgave me for
existing” gets to me every time I read it. The poem is an exceptionally
beautiful, heartfelt tribute to Updike’s hometown of Shillington. The reference
to “these modest facts” reminds me of Lowell’s “poor passing facts” in his
great “Epilogue.” Galassi is right when he says the “Endpoint” poems “recall
Robert Lowell’s work of the late 1960s and 1970s.” Reviewing Lowell’s Day by Day (1977), Helen Vendler said,
“Accuracy and fidelity to perception have rarely received such a desperate
pledge of faith” (Part of Nature, Part of
Us).
Accuracy and fidelity to
perception – these, it seems to me, are the hallmarks of Updike’s late
style, as expressed in his magnificent “Endpoint” poems – poems that do not
alter, dramatize, fictionalize, or otherwise transform the world, but strive to
show it exactly as he sees it.